22.4.09

los muertos dejan de ser BAJITOS

y el día llega como siempre
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en la cabeza que la lluvia no moja
como siempre

un destello permanente,
Tu cadencia
Tu sal
Tu gustito
queriendo cada lunar
cada figurita y forma

plaff
una certeza
que solamente es tiempo de paz
cuando quedan
cartuchos vacíos,
una mochila,
el puñal perdido
y un sable muerto

sin la lengua, adormecida de palabras nuevas
pero con formas que toman las cosas
nunca antes imaginadas
no prefabricadas
este mirá
ésta mira
mi mira
y yo perdido en el enjambre de las puertas
y los cordones desatados

¿Crear?
sólo puedo caminar
en busca de algún otro idiota como yo, que me de sentido
porque sin estar perdido
¿cómo puedo encontrarme?

46 comentarios:

Angeles dijo...

Sin estar perdido como voy a encontrarme.
....¡y perdernos la maravillosa oportunidad de encontrarnos los perdidos:))
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Cynthia dijo...

wowwwwwwww tienes un estilo especial... fuerte, pero me encanta encontrarte, sigue caminando no frenes... asi encontraras tus pasos.


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lichazul dijo...

los muertos dejan de ser ...
y pasan a rellenar la lista de lso que ya fueron.

Intrincada y llena de imagenes tu poesía
me deja un sabor a melancolía al leerla.
de todos modos muy bien construída
FELICITACIONES!!!


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Anónimo dijo...

Cierto.
Si nos buscamos a nosotros mismos, es porque en algún lugar nos extraviamos.

Otra certeza:
"...solamente es tiempo de paz
cuando quedan
cartuchos vacíos"

triste verdad.

saludos.

MediaLuna dijo...

Tanto perderse y buscarse sin encontrarse. Lo bello es el reto, la ruta, la musica de fondo, el camino.

Encantada,

Anónimo dijo...

Encontrarte no es tarea fácil.

Cuando me pierdo, me salgo de mi misma, me cruzo de vereda y me miro para decir...ahí estás. En algunas oportunidades me gustó como actuaba ese "yo" mio, otras veces me hubiera gustado que ese "yo" fuera de otro.

Impulsive Beauty dijo...

solo otra idiota seria capaz de llevarte a ti mismo?
mmm.... lo dudo
la amoldacion a lo ajeno no suele ser muy real
aunque cuando se suele andar por ahi solitario uno tiende a perderse

asi es la cosa

Anónimo dijo...

sin parar de andar. Aunque nos pese el cuerpo y en el camino no veamos el final.No parar. al fin y al cabo siempre es lo mismo.

un beso

Lau dijo...

En ocasiones, así, me encuentro, sin la lengua, adormecida de palabras nuevas .... buscándome, sin saber que perdida estoy, o perdiéndome, cuando me he encontrado .....

La vida siempre es un constante buscar ....


Hola, un abrazo

Antonio Ruiz Bonilla dijo...

Vas por buen camino, sigue escribiendo así, y pasea por el fin de los tiempos.
Un saludo

Anónimo dijo...

Llevo buscándome toda la vida... y creo que moriré sin encontrarme...
Buen relato
Besos

Dante Bertini dijo...

no paso para decirte algo que siempre será una resonancia, algo tan hueco como esto que te escribo ahora
ya está hecho, así que lo dejo tal cual y que sepas que anduve por aquí, leyéndote

Jessie dijo...

Pero si los muertos tarde ó temprano los encuentran. Y es mejor que no te pierdas, porque ya sabés que me encanta venir a leerte.

Te saludo y me despido

Atenamente:
Jessie

El antifaz dijo...

Se trata de luchar. No es necesario encontrarse urgentemente, sino más bien de no parar de encontrarse.
Saludos.

Anónimo dijo...

Buenoooo! Con una como ésta, de 11.
Un beso

Be dijo...

A veces necesitamos perdernos un rato, para encontrar nuestro camino con nuevos bríos y fuerzas.

Un abrazo!

Jimmy dijo...

No hace falta perderse para encontrarse. Cosa de no hallarse nomás.

Susana Peiró dijo...

Hummmmm, se me ocurre que estás buscando perderte, no encontrarte...

Buen Trabajo Allá!

Un Abrazo, Amigo!

Nallely Ricaño dijo...

Cuando caminas creas un camino inmenso...cuando te buscas estoy segura que te encontraras!...

Muy especial pasar por aqui, ten por seguro que aqui andare si usted me lo permite!..


Mucha luz!

Mar y ella dijo...

Ufff que pedazo de reflexión.....creo que yo me permito perderme y por largo rato no encontrarme;asi cuando me encuentro, me pongo feliz de saber que sigo viva en mi.....

Gracias por tu pasada y dejar tu huella para seguirte....

Un saludo.

Mariella

Carlos dijo...

Las palabras nuevas, aún adormecidas, laten en la boca, sólo hay que provocarlas.

Gracias por pasar por mi blog.

Milay dijo...

Ojo!!
Nos perdemos siempre...
pero nos encontramos rápido... siempre que abras las boca para decir alguna cosa.
Abrasos y salu2

Leslie C. dijo...

Prefiero perderme. Aunque ninguno de los dos extremos sea favorable. Más bien un intercambio estable vendría bien.

Saludos y que estes bien!

Carlos Lucero dijo...

¿nos encontramos caramelito?
¿donde?
yo todos los lunes de febrero, estoy en la galería de solos y solas.
total si nos perdemos

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